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 8/23/2009 9:05 PM
 

Kerry! Why were you so unsure about this chapter? It was adorable!! Alex is such a sweetheart. I love how they're both so comfortable with each other.

and Alex still seemed like he wanted to hang out with Madelyn even after she had ketchup on her face and she was unaware and he had to wipe it off for her.

Aww! Hahaha that was definitely one of those dorky but cute moments.

So I officially love Alex and Madelyn together. :] Can't wait for the next chapter Kerry! Love you.


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 8/23/2009 9:40 PM
 

Aw Kerr! That was a great chapter! I loved it!

I'm starting to love Alex even more now hahaha

And Madelyn and Alex are already starting to be so adorable together! :D

Yay! she told him about losing her music! That's a big deal and so exciting! And he's going to help her get it back! Yay! :D

Great job Kerr! I loved the chapter and love you!

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 8/24/2009 10:28 AM
 

That was fantabulous :D

The date was just so chill and perfect :D

And i love how she opened up about her music and that they want to see a lot more of each other.

And then the ketchup on her face made me laugh so hard. And they held hands??? Awh yay

And the flowers on the table...i pretty much melted right there and then! hahaha

Alex is just... gah...divine :D

Loved it hun and love you :D

Can't wait for more of this

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 8/27/2009 9:56 AM
 

Here's the next chapter. I hope you all like it. I'm not the biggest fan, it's sort of a filler, but it's setting up the next chapter. Comments are awesome! I hope you all like it :)

Ch. 6
It was a Friday night and Madelyn had the next day off from work. Kellie and her decided to go to the beach the next day, but of course didn’t want to go alone…
“Hello?”
“Hey Alex, its Madelyn.”
“Hey Mads, what’s up?”
“What are you and the guys doing tomorrow?”
“Umm, nothing that I know of… hold on. Hey Guys!” Madelyn heard Alex yell. “Do we have anything going on tomorrow?”
“Hey so um we don’t have anything going on, why?”
“Want to go to the beach with Kellie and me? Jay and Andy can bring people if they want…”
“Ooo that sounds like fun. I’ll ask the guys but at least count me in!” Alex said.
“Ok, cool, Kellie and I are thinking of leaving by eight to get to the beach early, so we can come get you guys before we leave.”
“Sounds good, I’ll see you tomorrow.”
“Ok, bye.”
Madelyn sighed an excited sigh. She was excited for tomorrow and now had to make sure she looked cute for tomorrow. She was also excited because she had been spending a lot of time with Alex lately and missed that he wasn’t around today.
Because Alex and Madelyn weren’t dating or anything yet (they had been hanging out but had only been on one official date) Madelyn decided on a fun and flirty bikini. She decided on a hot pink and purple bikini that was accented with little bows on her waist and one on the top.
Although it was the night before, Madelyn couldn’t wait for the beach the next day.
“Come on guys let’s go!” She heard Alex yell behind the door. “The girls will be here any minute!” Alex complained.
“Oh relax dude, just because you want to impress Maddie doesn’t mean you need to take it out on us.” Michael joked. Both Madelyn and Kellie rolled their eyes and decided to wait before knocking on the door.
“I’m not taking it out, but gentlemen are never late.” Alex reasoned.
“Dude, whatever, you totally just want to impress her.” Andy teased.
“Yeah well what about Aisling?” Alex asked.
“Don’t need to impress her much; we’ve been dating for a few months now.”
“It’s totally different when you have a girlfriend.” Jay agreed.
Kellie and Madelyn were leaning their ears up against the door trying to hear what the guys would say next.
“Um hi?” Someone said behind them causing them to jump.
“Any reason why you girls going inside?” The other girl asked them.
“Because the guys were talking about us.” Madelyn whispered.
“So you must be Kellie and Madelyn, the guys never stop talking about you girls. By the way, I’m Chrystal, I’m with Jay.”
“Hey it’s nice to meet you.” Both girls said.
“And I’m Aisling, Andy’s girlfriend.”
“It’s nice to meet you both too. I’m Madelyn and this is Kellie.”
“Hey! Who used my hair product?!” Mike yelled causing the girls to laugh. All four guys stopped dead in their tracks.
“Please don’t tell me they’re outside.” Michael groaned.
“Mornin' boys!” All four girls called through the door. It was silent for a few minutes before they heard crashes and grunts and people running into the door. It was opened a moment later by both Mike and Alex fighting over who was opening it. Jay and Andy sat back laughing along with Chrystal and Aisling while Madelyn coc.ked her head to the side and Kellie lifted one eyebrow.
“Umm hi?” They said.
“Hey.” Both Mike and Alex said trying to sound smooth and act cool.
“So who’s ready for the beach?” Madelyn asked trying to smooth everything out.
“Yeah, let’s go.” Chrystal and Aisling said as they made their way to the cars with everyone following behind.
“Ok so I can fit five in my car, well four not including me.” As she turned around she saw everyone piled by Aisling’s van except Alex. Both looked extremely uncomfortable.
“Looks like it’s just you and me…” Alex said uneasily.
“You ready?” Madelyn asked as she got in.
Alex usually liked being in control but in the thirty minute ride to the public beach he realized that he thought when girls drove it was completely and utterly sexy… except her shorts, t-shirt, and hair in a messy bun wasn’t exactly sexy to Alex.
“I’m so excited to go to the beach. I miss it so much.” There was something else that Alex found out about Madelyn, she liked the beach.
“I like the beach too.”
The two went back and forth talking about different things until they got to the beach. They both unloaded Madelyn’s car which had a beach blanket, lunches, and beach chairs in there.
They actually made a pretty good team. They set up the blanket and chairs together pretty quickly before anyone else got there. Madelyn ran back to her car and got the cooler for everyone along with her beach bag. When she got back to the beach she put both things down before slowly taking off her t-shirt and shorts.
Alex was shocked. Since Alex and she had been getting to know each other the last week and going out on dates, he had always seen her fully clothed. As Madelyn slowly took off her clothes to leave a small but cute and flirty bikini behind, well Alex was sort of shell shocked. Madelyn turned around and found Alex with his jaw slightly open and staring at her. She decided to tease him a little. She walked over to him and lightly ran her hand down his bare chest. He visible shivered before she said, “Like what you see?” She was smirking at him and at that he closed his mouth and narrowed his eyes at her. He hated that she had so much power over him. Madelyn turned away and sauntered over to the blanket to lay out for a tan. As she was walking Kellie did a cat call from the parking lot making Madelyn laugh before lying down.
As Madelyn got comfy on the blanket and before everyone else was there, Alex took his opportunity to get Madelyn back. She was laying on her stomach with her knees bent and her feet in the air as she read a gossip magazine. Quietly Alex snuck up on her and quickly threw her over his shoulder.
“Alex!” She complained. “Alex put me down!” But Alex just kept running towards the ocean with her in his hands. As she realized where he was going Madelyn started to freak out more. “Alex! Ah don’t you dare! Put me down!” She yelled. She was causing a scene among their friends. They started laughing and staring as Alex just kept going no matter how much she hit or kicked. He ran through the waves with her and when there was finally a big one, he just dropped her into the ocean.
“Oh you’re dead!” She exclaimed when she resurfaced. Alex laughed as he started running away from her. She quickly started running after him and finally caught up tackling him to the ground in the water. He quickly turned over and started splashing Jessa, who laughed, screamed, and splashed back.
Finally Alex stood up and helped Madelyn up. As they were standing in the water get lost in each other’s eyes, Alex’s hand found Madelyn’s hip and the other cupped her face while she had her arms around his waist. She looked up at Alex and slowly they both started inching towards each other. Their first kiss was going to be in front of all their friends but as far as Alex and Madelyn were concerned, it was just the two of them. Their lips were millimeters apart and both their eyes were closed when a huge wave crashed on them knocking Madelyn over and preventing the kiss from happening.
Madelyn was sprawled on the sand thankful that she hadn’t lost any articles of clothing while getting tossed around by the wave.
“Are you ok?!” Alex asked as he ran over to him, but saw that she was laughing hysterically. “You better get up before another wave comes.” He said as he gently took her hands in his and pulled her up.
“Thanks.” She said as her laughter finally subsided.
“Your welcome.” He said as he leaned down and gave her a sweet chaste kiss on her lips. She smiled as she grabbed his hand and brought him back to the beach blanket where everyone else was now set up. She quickly found her towel and started drying off hoping to get warm. Alex followed suit and picked up his towel running it all over his body and through his hair making it go every which way before sitting down on a beach chair and pulling Madelyn down onto his lap.
Every couple was off doing their own thing and by lunch time everyone had gone in the ocean at least once, even Michael and his hair had gone in. Everyone sat down and ate lunch together (which were just sandwiches). After lunch Jay had taken out his guitar and was playing around. Some of the guys were singing along while Madelyn and Alex were just sitting down next to each other.
“Hey.” She said turning to him. He put his book down and looked over at her.
“Want to go for a walk?” She asked. He nodded, but his book away and stood up helping Madelyn stand up before they both started walking down the beach hand in hand.
“So are you having fun?” Madelyn asked as they started walking.
“Yeah, you getting hit by that wave was priceless.” Alex said as he started laughing. Madelyn quickly hit him in the chest. He grabbed her hand and brought it up to his lips giving it a quick kiss before intertwining their fingers.
“I was joking; yes I am having fun, are you?” He asked.
“Yeah I am. I love the beach, even when someone’s mean and throws me in the water.” Madelyn said as she playfully glared at Alex.
“Sorry sweetness.” He said with a laugh as he kissed her head.
They walked hand in hand until they reached some rocks where they decided to try to climb them. Once they were at the top they both sat down to continue to talk some more.
“Ok um I know that we haven’t known each other very long and I don’t even know if we’re dating or not let along exclusive, but umm I starting to really like you.” Madelyn said out of the blue. Alex broke out into a huge smile and slightly chuckled before leaving a lingering kiss on her cheek.
“You’re cute.” He said with a smile as he leaned his forehead on hers. “And I like you too.” He said.
“Ok good.” Madelyn said with a smile as she cupped his face and leaned in and kissed him. Alex kissed back and it was their first kiss other than the peck on the beach earlier. This one last a lot longer and if they were on a more comfortable surface, Madelyn and Alex are sure they would have kissed longer.
“There’s only one thing…”
Around a half hour after their walk started, Madelyn and Alex made their way back over to their friends and the blanket. Jason, Andrew, Aisling, and Chrystal were all in the water.
“Hey guys.” Kellie said as Alex went and sat in a beach chair and Madelyn walked over to the blanket.
“Hi.” Both Alex and Madelyn said back.
“So um Mike… wanna go on a walk?” Madelyn asked. Mike’s eyes popped out of his head.
“Oh um sure…”
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 8/27/2009 10:03 AM
 

Ch. 5 thank you’s:
Kellie: Thanks sweetie! It was a cute dorky moment, and it’s something that would totally happen to me hahaha. Aw thanks for reading sweetie! Love you!
Chrystal: Thanks I’m glad you like it Chrys. Hahaha I’m glad you’re starting to love Alex even more. Hahaha I’m glad you think they’re adorable together. Thanks I love you too!
Aisling: Aw thanks for thinking the date is perfect. Hahaha I’m glad you melted with the flowers! Thanks for reading Ais. I love you too!
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 8/27/2009 11:38 AM
 

Awwww Kerr... that was adorable! Filler shmiller... that was cute! hehe :D I loved it!

Alex and Madelyn are adorable! I love them! And I loved the whole part with Alex throwing her in the water... that was great! But man... stupid wave ruining their kiss... gah!

But oh my gosh! Madelyn wants to go on a walk with Mike?! What's going to happen???!!! Way to leave us with a cliffhanger Kerr *sigh* hahaha

Cliffhanger or not... I loved the chapter anyway! It was great! and of course love you too! :D

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 8/27/2009 12:38 PM
 
 Modified By DJ Dangerr -is luv-  on 8/27/2009 1:41:23 PM

I really loved the whole scene where the girls were standing outside the guy's door listening to them. That was funny. Michael's such a dork. Hahaha.

Maddie is such a tease! Wow! Haha. Ooohh so they both like each other! Well...duh. 9-10? :] I'm a little worried to know what's gonna happen on Mike and Madelyn's walk. I think I should be the one taking a walk with him but...it's whatever. Haha just kidding.

Oh and btw, 10-10?

Loved the chapter and love you! Can't wait to read more!


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 8/28/2009 11:46 PM
 

chap 5=amazing.alex was so cute with the note-you're the girl i'm trying to impress.

chap 6=so good.they're first kiss was cute and them at the beach was cute.and her and michael talking-can't wait to see what happens there.

great chapters and can't wait to see what's next!

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 8/30/2009 3:53 PM
 

Kerry that was fabulous :D

I love Alex and Maddie they are just so cute together :D

Oh Andy...*melts* hehehe oh and he thinks he doesn't need to impress the girlfriend eh?

Loved it hun and love you can't wait for more xD

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 9/13/2009 8:34 PM
 

Sorry it's taken me so long to flippin update. This semester is kicking my butt! I no joke did 7 hours of homework today... it was awesome... Anyway I hope you all like this chapter! Thanks!

Ch. 7
Kellie also looked shocked as Mike stood up and followed Madelyn as they walked the opposite way that Madelyn and Alex had walked.
“So what’s up?” Mike asked once they had been walking for a few minutes and no one could hear them.
“So I think it’s obvious that I really like Alex and he’s very close with you. So umm in order for Alex and I to actually start seeing each other well I know that I need to make up with you, or at least get some feelings out in the open. And before you say anything I’m not just doing this because he asked me to or because you are his best friend, I know I need to do it for me too. I mean it was four years ago and I’m still bitter about it.”
“I really didn’t mean to hurt you Maddie.” Mike said softly.
“Then why? Why did we throw away a friendship over a hook up?”
“Because after we had sex, we weren’t just friends anymore.” Mike said softly.
“Wait, so you had feelings for me?!” Madelyn asked surprised. Mike kept his eyes locked on his feet as he nodded his head.
“Oh. My. God.”
Madelyn walked away trying to get her thoughts together. For some reason she was not expecting Mike to tell her he had had feelings for her. If anything she was expecting him to tell her he hated her because he never called her back.
“Mads- Maddie… Madelyn! Wait!” Mike said as he caught up to her and took her elbow lightly in his hand but firmly enough to get her attention and make her look at him.
“I’m sorry. I know that was stupid of me and I shouldn’t have reacted that way but I didn’t know what else to do. I mean we were best friends and then all of a sudden we were more? Plus I didn’t know how you would have handled it and you were only twenty one, I was twenty six…” Mike was rambling. Madelyn took a deep breath before looking at him.
“Ok…” She said quietly.
“What?” He asked surprised she was actually speaking to him.
“It’s in the past Mike, lets just move on. We obviously don’t have feelings for each other anymore. I mean you like Kellie and I like Alex, so whatever, let’s just move on.”
Neither really knew what to say so both kept waling in silence but both were now closer then they had been. It wasn’t an uncomfortable or awkward silence either just both trying to collect their thoughts.
“I wrote a song about you- us.”
“Really?” Madelyn asked surprised.
“Yeah come on it’s on my ipod.” Mike said as he turned them around.
They walked in silence until they got back to the blanket.
“Hey guys.” Kellie greeted.
“Hi.” Mike and Madelyn said quietly.
Kellie and Alex looked confused as Mike went through his bag and gave Madelyn his ipod and then without saying anything else they left on another walk.
“That was weird.” Kellie said once they left. Alex nodded in agreement.
“Here this is the song.” Mike said as he found it and handed Madelyn the ear phones.
As Madelyn listened to the song all the memories came flooding back to her.
You were always the girl
Who would give me girl advice whenever I needed it
My best friend in the world
My friends thought you were fine but I was always denyin’ it
“Hello?”
“Mads…” Mike complained.
“Ok what’s her name and what’s wrong?” Madelyn asked.
“Andrea… can you come over?” Mike asked. Madelyn sighed as she looked at her paper that was half done and was due in the morning.
“Please?”
“Ugh, fine give me twenty minutes and I’ll be over.” Madelyn said.
“Thanks you’re the best!” Mike said happily.
“You’re lucky I love you.” Madelyn grumbled.
Madelyn was always helping Mike with his girl problems and actually he was a pretty good listener too.
Madelyn ended up staying at Mike’s house just talking, laughing, and giving him advice. Around twelve Mike’s roommates came home.
“Hey!” They called.
“Hi!” Mike and Maddie called back. They were cuddling on the couch.
“Ok, I should go.” Madelyn said quietly.
“Come on Mads, just stay a little bit longer?”
“Mike, I’ve already spent two hours here and I have to go finish a paper…” Madelyn complained.
“Ugh fine, I’ll see you later?”
“Yeah, bye.” Madelyn said as he kissed his cheek.
“Hey call me when you get home?” Mike asked.
“Kay.”
“Bye Mark, bye Phil.” Madelyn called to Mike’s roommates.
“Bye Maddie!” They called. She closed the door behind her.
Mark and Phil plopped down next to Mike on the couch.
“Dude, you do realize you’re best friend is hot.” Mark said.
“Hey! Don’t talk about her like that!” Mike said becoming defensive.
“No, he’s right Mike, she is really cute!” Phil said.
“Whatever, I’m going to bed, night guys.” Mike said as he got up.
“Night.” They called back.
“He’s so in denial.” Phil said once Mike was in his room.
Then one summer day
I saw you sitting by your swimming pool
And I was thinking ‘damn you really changed’
You’re not the little girl I used to know
You opened up my eyes
“Hey Mads, the Bruno’s are coming over for dinner.”
“Ok, sounds good.” Madelyn said as she grabbed a towel and went to her pool in her back yard. She must have fallen asleep because the next thing she knew she was getting woken up. She pushed away the hand that was dripping water on her.
“What?” She asked grumpily.
“Wake up grumps.” Mike said as he tried not to laugh.
“Go away Mike.” Madelyn complained.
“Come on bud, time to get ready for dinner.” He said.
“Ugh fine.” Madelyn said as she got up. As she did Mike’s breath hitched. When the heck did Madelyn have such a shape to her body? Mike couldn’t look away. She definitely wasn’t his best friend from growing up, she was older now, and man was she cute!
“Did Andrea turn you down?” Madelyn asked as she got up.
“No, why?” He asked.
“Oh because you were like staring…” Madelyn said confused.
“Oh, sorry.” He said as he shook his head and walked away from her. Weird, she thought as she followed him inside.
I see you walk across my room in
Nothing but the moonlight
Now I love to see you in the dark
See you in the dark
My window, frames you like a Monet
So don’t come back to bed yet
Cuz I love to see you in the dark
See you in the dark
Madelyn was lying in bed trying to fall asleep, which wasn’t working. Her phone buzzed and lit up the room. She rolled over and opened up her phone to see a text from Mike.
You awake?
-Mike
Unfortunately yes, I can’t sleep :(
-Mads
You up for a midnight visit?
-Mike
My parents wouldn’t be happy about you being here
-Mads
So come over here. Phil and Mark are gone for the weekend…
-Mike
The things I do for you ;), I’ll be over in a few
-Mads
Madelyn snuck out of her house and got into her car driving over to Mike’s apartment. She got out of her car and made her way up to his complex. He buzzed her in and she went up.
“Hey!” She said as she joined him in his den she snuggled up next to him. She was in short athletic shorts and her hair was up in a messy bun with Mike’s sweatshirt to top it all off.
“Hi.” He said as he pulled her to him and placed her head under his chin. “Thanks for coming over.” She smiled in return.
They watched TV for a while just talking with Madelyn’s head in Mike’s lap.
“You tired?” Madelyn asked as Mike yawned.
“No not really.” He said as he shook his head. Madelyn’s hand went up to his face and cupped it. He gently kissed her hand before leaning down and giving Madelyn a sweet kiss. They both pulled away smiling. They spent a few minutes kissing before both deciding to take it to the bedroom.
I’ll never see you the same
The veil has been lifted, now I see you’re gifted
My whole perspective has changed
Don’t think I can go back cause I will always desire it
Madelyn snuggled more into her pillow, but opened her eyes when she felt it move. Memories from the night before were flooding back.
“Morning.” Mike said quietly.
“Morning.” Madelyn said back. “What time is it?”
“Around eight.”
“I should probably go home soon so my parents don’t flip out.” Madelyn said as she moved to get out of bed but was pulled back by Mike. He leaned in and left a lingering kiss on her lips.
“Bye.”
“Bye.”
As Madelyn left Mike realized he was screwed, he had fallen for his best friend who happened to be five years younger than him. This would now be completely different and he had to make a choice.
Madelyn continued to listen to the rest of the song memories flooding back to her. She continued to star out into the ocean watching the waves as a song came to an end.
“So…” Mike said trying to make things a little less awkward and get the conversation rolling.
“You should have told me Mike.” Madelyn said softly.
“I know. I know was stupid and believe me still to this day I regret it. I mean I lost my best friend…”
“How do you think I felt Mike?!” Madelyn asked finally tearing her eyes off the ocean and staring back at Mike. “I lost my best friend and I had no idea why! I just… you stopped talking to me. I thought I did something wrong!” Madelyn yelled.
“Mads, how could you think that?”
“How could I not think that? You wouldn’t call me back. You wouldn’t talk to me at all. You had freakin Mark and Phil make up horrible excuses why you couldn’t talk to me!” Madelyn yelled.
“I know, I freaked. I’m sorry.”
“You flippin drive me nuts.” Madelyn said her voice finally quieting down.
“Are you ever gonna forgive me? Can we ever go back to how we were?”
“You want the truth?” Madelyn asked. Mike took a deep breath and nodded.
“I don’t know.”
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Mike and Madelyn walked silently back to the blanket. Mike dejectedly plopped down next to Kellie as Madelyn grabbed her things without saying a word and went back to her car.
“Um…” Alex said.
“You go with Mads, I got Mike.” Kellie whispered, knowing something definitely went on with Mike and Madelyn during the walk. Alex nodded and without saying anything else followed Madelyn to the parking lot.
This was going to be very interesting.
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